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I was about nearing the end of this short story when I realized that the story isn't actually about what I though it was about. I think this is probably a pretty common occurrence. Scripts oft...

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So we were sitting around watching cartoons, like ya do, and I started messing around painting on the ipad. I took a bunch of disjointed ideas and sort of mashed them together. The result was ...

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Sometimes you have to step back to move forward. I realized partway through writing this story that something was off. something felt flat. That isn't uncommon. Stories, like most things,...

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Still working away over here. I got to the end of the story and I realized that I really needed some more... something. I'm working at adding that something in. Like always, this story is very...

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Some more work being done over here. I think this story is in need of some heavy editing and rewriting. I find it's telling and not showing and that distances the reader from the characters to...

395 - Dragon's Lair

Best Games - Dragon’s LairWhat if one of the best games is actually a very bad game. I mean that’s nonsense right? It can’t be both one of the best games and be bad right? It...

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it continues here, but I think I'll switch it up an write something else next week, in addition to working on the story. Too many -it continues- posts in a row makes me feel antsy. 

393

the story continues over here but as always, it's not done yet and there are some major edits that I will need to do, so read it at your own risk I suppose.

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More work over here . I haven't really added any 'story' past where I was last time, but I have reworked a lot of the preceding stuff to better match where it will be going. When I though...

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the story continues.