I’ve been doing some editing on the last story I wrote. It’s pretty amazing what changing 100 or so words can do. The tone of a lot of sentences can change drastically with one or two small adjustments. And sometimes changing the setting or wording of an entire scene can change the story.

For both of these I tried to paint more like I would with regular paints. Laying down daubs of color and pushing and pulling them around on one layer rather than creating masks and layers like I would often do while painting digitally. Mostly I’m just trying to get better at painting.

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This past weekend I participated in the Alberta Game Jam. Game creators from all over the province convened over Discord to put on this remote version of the game jam. While I usually find the fun of a game jam is working with a team, I opted to attempt this one solo. It wasn’t very successful.

Did some editing and rewriting over here. This story isn’t fully working yet, but it’s getting better. Probably needs another pass or two. and maybe some structure changes. and maybe some more eyes on it. If you know what’s broken here and have ideas on how to fix it, let me know.

I sort of want to talk about machine learning and intelligence. I spent a bunch of time over the last few weeks messing around with Unity’s machine learning tools. I won’t be putting together any kind of tutorial or forwarding any real actionable info here, because honestly I don’t think I am in any position to offer any. I have a better idea how ML works and what sort of problems it seems to be good at, but I think that there are some very harsh limits to what machine learning is capable of. I also think that there are a lot of people out there who are quick to overlook those limits. There is this commonly held belief that machine learning will be the thing that makes computers smarter than humans. Let me tell you, Skynet, this ain’t.

The wizard sits. The wizard reclines, luxuriating upon the fabric of the universe pulled taut. Seated on a product of their own will. The imposition of their desire on local space. A type of calm radiates through their form. A body of flesh and metal coalesced through technology and sorcery. All one and the same, at a fundamental level. The forces and the fabric. The knowledge and the tools. Blood and muscle and conduits and electrical load. The suppression of fear, hesitation. The intent to manipulate. All the same. All the same. At a fundamental level.

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The first draft of the new story is complete and up over here. There will be revisions, but it’s a story start to finish.

I was about nearing the end of this short story when I realized that the story isn’t actually about what I though it was about. I think this is probably a pretty common occurrence. Scripts often go through many rewrites, adjusting and molding the story the entire time. Short stories are the same. I have been going back over it and cutting out a lot of cruft. It feels similar to sculpting. cept with words. and mud. always there is mud.

So we were sitting around watching cartoons, like ya do, and I started messing around painting on the ipad. I took a bunch of disjointed ideas and sort of mashed them together. The result was this green and yellow, off kilter, poor anatomy, unplanned sketch.

Sometimes you have to step back to move forward. I realized partway through writing this story that something was off. something felt flat. That isn’t uncommon. Stories, like most things, are sort of bad until they aren’t. Sometimes they even get good. This story wasn’t going to reach the lofty heights of ’not bad’ unless I went back in a reworked some stuff. So that’s exactly what I did.

Still working away over here. I got to the end of the story and I realized that I really needed some more… something. I’m working at adding that something in. Like always, this story is very much open on the table so I wouldn’t suggest reading it unless you want to see how much it changes between now and when I finally call it done. So you probably shouldn’t read it yet, but I won’t stop you if you want to.

Some more work being done over here. I think this story is in need of some heavy editing and rewriting. I find it’s telling and not showing and that distances the reader from the characters too much. It’ll get there. Just needs some work.