Working on my characters. Getting some Astar vibes.

Best Games - The Outer Wilds Movies are linear, plays are linear, songs are linear, books are linear. They can all contain stories told from start to middle to end. There are Choose Your Own Adventure books and even some Choose Your Own Adventure style video things, but they are all, at their core, linear. You can make choices that change the moment to moment story, but you can’t experience that story in a way other than the way the authors intended. You can try but it just won’t make any sense.

I had a different thing queued up to write about this week, but I did another revision of the story over here. It’s getting much closer to ‘done’ so if you came here before, saw it, and chose to wait until it was done, you could probably read it now. I meant to condense some stuff and ended up adding some. It happens.

I did a pretty major edit to the story over here. I think it has some promise and after reading a bunch of articles, some web how to’s, and more than 1 book on the topic, I finally have some idea how to fix the structural problems I keep running into when I’m writing. I doubt that I have cleared up 100% of the problems with that particular story, but I have pushed it further in the direction of ‘good’.

Best Games - Moto Racer Moto Racer is a deeply unfair game. Every slight bend in the road could end your race. A mistimed button press could mean the difference between finishing first or last. Nailing every corner, every straightaway, every jump is absolutely required to win. That’s on the medium difficulty. Moto Racer demands perfection.

A full first draft of the new story is up here. Like all first drafts it’s a little janky in places and will have errors, typos, and plain busted stuff all up in there. If you read it and have suggestions on how to correct that jank, please let me know. I’ll probably give it a couple weeks to breath and then revisit the story to punch it up. I have another one that I am in the process of punching up, so I’ll probably do that first. In any case, if you read it, I hope you enjoy it.

Added a few more pages. I thought this one was only going to be about 5 pages, but I blew past that and I’m only about half done. So probably closer to 15 or 20 pages when it’s all done. Not super short, but regular short story length. I’m getting better at predicting how long a story will be but I’m not good at it yet.

just a brief intermission. This is Nomad Sculpt. It’s a sculpting app for the Ipad and it rips. 

Continuing to write this small story over here. I’ve plotted it out to only be between 5 and ten pages, so I’ll probably have it all wrapped up next week. If I were you, I would wait until then to read it.

Started a new one over here. It won’t be a very long one, but it might take a week or two to get it all out.

This is the Sorcerer of Vapor. Enjoy. ​

This page will be moving. Again. I started this thing on Blogger. I only wrote about 20-30 posts before moving it all over to Weebly. I’ve spent the last several years posting at least once a week to weebly and now I’m moving again. It’s just not the right platform for what I’m doing.

Best Games - Burnout Paradise Does the idea of spinning donuts around the infield of a baseball stadium sound appealing? Would you like to launch a car off a ramp, sail an unreasonable distance, and nail a perfect 4 wheel landing losing no momentum? Would you like to nudge a supercar into a barrier and watch it crumple like foil knowing there would be no consequences or injuries? What if you could drive impossibly fast not only over the road, but through buildings, on train tracks, on park pathways, and more? Burnout Paradise has you covered.

Imagine you were to get to see some amazing old sculpture. A real museum piece. The Venus De Milo. You get your eyes on the Venus De Milo. You’re looking at it and you want to steal it. There is a museum curator watching you, there are security guards, other museum patrons, etc. There is absolutely no way they will let you do that. Also, the statue has to weigh close to 2 tons. You aren’t going to be hauling it out on your back, but you can take a picture of it. Maybe a lot of pictures. Maybe a lot of pictures with a camera that can capture depth and minor variations in the surface of the marble. Pits, cracks, dust, all of it. You and your camera take a quick buzz around the Venus snapping shots the whole way, and bug out.

Last Monday I posted a link. Just a link. The link led to the game that I finished during the Global Game Jam. Like everyone participating in the jam, I saw the theme on Friday, worked on the game Friday night and Saturday, and finished it up on Sunday.